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We made a decision about what to do next.We decided what to do next.These proposals could have a substantial effect on communities.These proposals could substantially affect communities.MSPs gave their approval to the proposals.MSPs approved the proposals.Options for service provision include the use of arm’s-length external organisations.Options for providing services include using arm’s-length external organisations.Public sector organisations make a significant contribution to the islands’ economy.Public sector organisations contribute significantly to the islands’ economy.Editing to improve the overall tone of your writing
It’s often worth doing a mechanical edit – that is, freeing the hidden verb – and thinking of ways to express...